Argument: For what would you risk your life?

Assertion/Claim

People risks their lives for things they feel vital or important to them everyday.

For your friends?
Family?
Your country?
For a stranger?
Your rights?

Humans have a natural nurturing instinct, which makes us feel we need to stand up for and protect our family and friends, even if it means risking our lives.

• Commentary 1: For example, mothers with their children, as providers they have a natural feeling that makes them bend over backwards to provide and be the best they can. Even If it means risking their own life.
• Commentary 2: And soldiers, fighting for their country, they are out their protecting what they feel to be theirs. We have so many willing soldiers over seas fighting for our country, for our freedom, for everything we know to be.
• Commentary 3: Mr. Luther King Jr. said, " A man who won't die for something is not fit to live." Mr. Luther King was very brave, bravery, maybe that's what this all boils down to, he risked not only his life but his families life to stop segregation.

The power of the mind is so powerful that sometimes it is hard, and even impossible to overcome it. And even though maybe what we feel to be right might not be, we will do whatever it takes to make it the way we feel, or have been taught to be right.

• Commentary 1: Also like when the 911 terrorist attacks accorded. Those bombers believed they were doing what was best to protect their country and their people. Even though what they did was very wrong, they risked, or sacrificed their lives more or less for what they believed to be right.
• Commentary 2: Last but not least, Anne Frank, a very brave young woman risked her life for the lives of complete strangers. She took people in her home and hid them from the German Nazis'. Knowing that is she were caught if would be sure death or worse.

Opposing Claims

• A lot of people say " " that they would risk their lives for things that are important to them, when in reality they are to selfish and self conceded to risk their own lives for anyone. They would be too worried about their own well- being to try and help or care for someone else.
• And others, were simply born without the will to protect, without that nurturing instinct.

My rebuttal

• Although sometimes I have said something that I didn't mean, or said I would do something I didn't. I honestly can safe that if someone in my family, or someone I love were in danger I would risk my life for them. And maybe one day when the world makes more sense to me, when I am older, I will have feelings like this about a lot more things in life.

People risks their lives for things they feel vital or important to them everyday.Humans have a natural nurturing instinct, which makes us feel we need to stand up for and protect our family and friends, even if it means risking our lives. For example, mothers with their children, as providers they have a natural feeling that makes them bend over backwards to provide and be the best they can. Even If it means risking their own life. And soldiers, fighting for their country, they are out their protecting what they feel to be theirs. We have so many willing soldiers over seas fighting for our country, for our freedom, for everything we know to be. Mr. Luther King Jr. said, " A man who won't die for something is not fit to live." Mr. Luther King was very brave, bravery, maybe that's what this all boils down to, he risked not only his life but his families life to stop segregation. The power of the mind is so powerful that sometimes it is hard, and even impossible to overcome it. And even though maybe what we feel to be right might not be, we will do whatever it takes to make it the way we feel, or have been taught to be right. Furthermore when the 911 terrorist attacks accorded. Those bombers believed they were doing what was best to protect their country and their people. Even though what they did was very wrong, they risked, or sacrificed their lives more or less for what they believed to be right. Last but not least, Anne Frank, a very brave young woman risked her life for the lives of complete strangers. She took people in her home and hid them from the German Nazis'. Knowing that is she were caught if would be sure death or worse. Some people however could go against my claim in selfishness or whatever it may be.A lot of people say " " that they would risk their lives for things that are important to them, when in reality they are to selfish and self conceded to risk their own lives for anyone. They would be too worried about their own well- being to try and help or care for someone else. And others, were simply born without the will to protect, without that nurturing instinct. Although sometimes I have said something that I didn't mean, or said I would do something I didn't. I honestly can safe that if someone in my family, or someone I love were in danger I would risk my life for them. And maybe one day when the world makes more sense to me, when I am older, I will have feelings like this about a lot more things in life. Therefore even after all of my research and evaluation I still stand by the statement that people will risk their lives for what they believe to be important, no matter what it may be.

I believe that in my writing I am both deductive and inductive. I use a lot of facts but I always have an opinion on them. I thinks its important everyone is heard.